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Posted by Yasuha Artist · Oct 15, 2026
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- Pre-release · Oct 31, 2026
Sounds like southern boom, and trap bap.
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Hey there, Yashua - thanks for the submission. Your track has a unique sound and real home-made, underground feel. The vocal has character, but the mix is very unbalanced. The vocal goes from way too quiet to way too loud. The flow and the sung parts are quite basic and feel quite stiff and mono-tone. The backing has some cool sounds, but the melodic elements feel a little underdeveloped and lack a memorable motif imo. Finally, the start of the track needs to be edited out as there is an unwanted click and a gap before the track starts. Overall, a unique track with some cool sounds, but because of the things I mentioned, it's not right for the playlist I'm afraid. Good luck with it.
Glad you found it useful. That was a quick remix - are you sure that inconsistent vocal volume is sorted?! Don't forget, that wasn't the only thing I mentioned. I'm willing to have another listen of course, but I don't want to waste your credits. The system is not able to give refunds, but I think if you send it to me as part of a campaign, I can let it expire if I don't like it, which means I won't take your credits. Not sure how the campaigns work or if you can do a campaign with only 1 curator. It would mean no feedback if I let it expire....Maybe the best idea is just take the feedback and use it to make your next track the best it can be? Wishing you the best.
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Hey Yasuha, thanks for sharing your track! I like the moody atmosphere and the raw vibe, which gives the music a distinct character. There’s a nice sense of attitude in the overall sound, and the darker mood works well with the style you’re exploring. For my hip-hop playlist, though, I’m looking for something a little different. My selection focuses on brighter, more laid-back old-school hip-hop, with jazzy samples, warm grooves and that relaxed boom-bap feel. Your track has a darker, more southern-inspired approach, so it doesn’t quite match the atmosphere I’m building with the playlist. Thanks again for the submission, and I hope the track gets some great support from curators who appreciate this style! Best, Domas
Hello there! I'm sorry to say that I will be declining your track because the quality of the production didn't meet my standards. I think the direction is definitely correct but the sound selection is still lacking for me. Your raps are good, I love that you incorporated a hook as well. But, this is a decline for me. Sorry!
I think you have a good song because the verses are good, but it would need a catchier chorus that convinces me more. I wish you luck.
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Creo que tienes una buena canción porque los versos son buenos, pero necesitaría un estribillo más pegadizo y que me convenza más. Te deseo suerte
Hi Yasuha, I really liked the chill ambience of the beat and the catchy hook but unfortunately the vocal sounded too quiet in the mix during the verses and overall I felt like the volume and dynamics of the vocal could have been more consistent. I'm sorry to turn down your submission for now.
Hey, Nice sounding bassline in this one. personally felt the mix needed work. I like some more dynamics over the mix. Also the chorus the vocal sat well in the mix but the verses the vocals felt really quiet and quite muffled in the mix. They were also missing clarity in the high end. Just my personal preference of course. Totally fine if this was the vibe you were going for. Good luck with your release! Jens
Hey Yasuha, While I can definitely appreciate your bars and your sound design, I would have avoided mixing in gentler chords and samples, or singing. We're really going for a more gangsta rap and aggressive vocal performance combination for the playlist; the gentler sound design and inclusion of singing definitely softens the blow for me. Overall it was a solid track though. On future rap subs, consider sending. track which has darker chords, samples, and avoids singing to be a better fit with us. For the music -VH
Hi there! Great track. Really liked the rap vocals and vibes . However , the overall instrumental and the mix didn't sound that convincing . Rest ,the track has got some real good potential. Good luck! can't wait to hear more tracks from you.
Notamos que esta música possui melodia secundário marcante mais os componentes de bateria que possuem sons manipulados por meio de filtro passa-baixa e a ressonância. Vimos que sua voz segue sincronizado na maioria dos trechos musicais e qualidade sonora também está boa. Em alguns trechos, percebi que os chimbais são tocados com figuras rítmica 1/4 com variedade de intensidade a cada 1 tempo forte. Os efeitos sonoros também garantem que a sonoridade seja nível competitivo entre artistas famosos. Por questões de seletividade, asseguramos manter playlists com qualidade de curadoria. Bom trabalho!
Hi there! Great track. Really enjoyed the vibes and the instrumental . However , for our playlist , we lookout for a bit old school Snoop Dogg style rap stuff. Rest ,the track has got some real good potential. Good luck! can't wait to hear more tracks from you.
Hey there! We appreciate your careful voice sync along with creative melodies and warm beat. However the overall vibe feels a bit nostalgic with those melodies and somewhat even a little moody/thoughtful with the tone of your vocal, which doesn't fit quite nice among other slightly upbeat tracks (with less high-pitched tone of lead) and warmer melodic rapping along that we usually prefer in our 'melodic hip hop & rnb' playlist on our profile, sorry 🙏
Hey Yasuha. Hearing a good flowing arrangement already on the track. However, there's something about the sound of the vocal that I didn't connect with as much as I think I could have. I do think it's how it was recorded or mixed. It's a bit too thin with a very treble leaning tone. It makes the vocal a bit too unclear and hard to understand. It is also a bit too dynamic with the soft parts of the vocal getting drowned in the instrumental. Another look at the mix character/tone of the vocal could help the track out a bit more so I'll decline for now
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I appreciate your feedback. I took notes and made some edits. Would you be willing to revisit a consideration?