The Clown That Confronts

Hey there , wonderful track . Really loved the vocal content and the catchy instrumental . The melodies also sound amazing . But at the moment , I am focusing a bit more light and jolly stuff , Alt- J style . Good luck! we will have to pass on this one .

Hey there, thank you for sharing your song with me! I think that the drum beat was really interesting, well done with the guitar themes and the e-piano it worked really well in my opinion. I think that you have managed to create a great mood, very well done with the feel that you have created, it sounded really interesting. You have managed to create a great drum beat also, very well done with the feel that you have came up with, it was pretty cool in my opinion. I think that the song worked nicely instrumental wise, but for me personally it was just not as engaging vocal melody wise, I'm really sorry. Good luck with your submission!

Hey The Great Recycle, It's so easy to latch onto this Melody, I think it's a nice up-and-down arpeggio that changes on the last go of the verse. Nice job on creating a memorable line there. Now, for a rock sub, I would have been looking for a more aggressive rock sound design on the drums and guitars, leaning into gritty vocals that match the classic hard rock sound. This ever present acoustic guitar sound design, as well as the gentler harmony and singing style, is more reminiscent to me of a soft rock mood than the hard rock that I'm looking for. On future rock subs, consider sending me any track with a more hard rock or classic rock approach overall to be a better fit with us! For the music -VH

Hello and thank you very much for sharing your song with us. Appreciate that. Great instrumental performance. We like the guitar and drums in particular. However, first of all the vocal melodies didn't catch our attention enough...additionally we think your track would benefit from better mixing. Some part don't sit well in the mix: E.g. some of the hats, vocal... Keep refining your art, keep on rockin'!

vocals are incredibly endearing and radio friendly, the song has that summery vibe to it. it's a personal preference kinda thing but the mix is leaning a tad bit too heavily on the raw end for it to fit into the aesthetics of my curation, i'm sorry

Hi there and thank you for submitting your song! A nice and vibrant tune for sure, I like the bassline in there. The instrumental is on point and I like the symbal in there as well. The vocals drop in after 20 seconds and this is a bit too late for me though. I prefer the vocals earlier on, but also with a bit more power and energy in there. I am sure there is an audience for your song but it's a bit too slow paced for me. All the best, R

the song has good vocals and a good story and I like the 80's jam inspired power pop influenced sound that you created. Very clever intelligent style. But in addition to needing to sound more modern I 🤔that the structure needs to be stronger. Getting to the chorus twice as fast.. and really rocking out when you get there... sounding more energized musically and emotionally charged vocally is going to help create stronger hooks and no one hates hooks! Keep up the interesting work and I hope the feedback was helpful!

Hey, The Great Recycle! How are you? Your guitar builds up and brings an energetic groove to The Clown That Confronts. Your vocals also stand out, sounding gentle while conveying a mature tone. However, this more intense energy, with its rock influence, moves away from our simpler and calmer chill atmosphere. Still, we respect and admire your musical craftsmanship. Your style is unique and elegant! Don't forget to leave our profile a positive rating. Nage, Chill Connections

Hey. Thanks for sharing this song with us. There are elements of this song I enjoy, it is well written melodically and lyrically. I like the mix also, everything sounds well balanced with some nice bv's and subtle dybamic changes. Although I think instrumentally this would be suited for our playlists, I did find the vocal melody a little pop leaning and for that reason I will have to pass, although wishing you the very best with this release.

I like the energy you’ve brought into this, and there’s a strong presence to the overall sound! It feels a little too intense for the vibe I’m looking for in my playlist, so it’s not quite the right match this time. A slightly softer approach could help bring out more balance while still keeping that impact you’re going for. Keep exploring your sound, and I’d love to hear what you share next!

Hey The Great Recycle, Really digging the catchy rhythm and I like the production quality of this track. But the one thing that makes me doubt here is the too upbeat feel. It's not bad at all but I prefer music with a more laid-back vibe and in this track, it has a lot of energy, which is why this doesn't quite match the vibe I'm aiming for. With that, I'll have to decline this unfortunately. I appreciate your understanding and keep creating more music! Take care!

Hey The Great Recycle, thanks for sending your track "The Clown that Confronts" our way. We admire the track's motifs but we feel it lacks additional motifs. We will sadly have to pass on. Keep making more music.