Song to Carol
Posted by Chris Portka Artist · Jun 4, 2026
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Hey there! To start with, I really dig that hypnotizing effect that your tune has on me. Infectious percussion, catchy bass line and hi-pitched back vocals. Pretty unusual layering. I like your openness to experiments. Unfortunately, the vocal lines did not resonate enough with me. I'm really sorry. Your music is a wonderful piece of art - thank you for the submission!
In terms of sound and instrumental quality, I can say that the proposal is pleasant and maintains a good level throughout its development. There is a noticeable carefulness in the production and a competent execution that adds value to the whole. However, being completely honest, the vocal performance does not quite align with what I am currently looking for. Due to the criteria I am using at this selection stage, I need voices that generate a more immediate impact and connection in me to consider including them in my playlist.
The song for Carol is perceived as carefully crafted in terms of sound. I like the polished sound and rich instrumentation. But, regarding its theme and lyrics, it is somewhat lacking in depth. It entertains, but I don't feel that it leaves a lasting mark on the listener as much as I would have liked. Therefore, it seems to me that it is not the song I am looking for for the playlist. So much repetition and lack of twists work against it when it comes to innovating.
Hi there and thank you for sharing your music Chris Portka! A nice and vibrant tune for sure. That bass in there sounds crisp. Well done on the production. For me personally: a bit too repetitive and slow paced. I prefer more energetic singing right from the start with a bit more variety in timbre and vocal. I am sure there is an audience for this, but for me personally it does not tick the boxes. All the best and have a great day, R
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Hi Chris Portka, I loved the smooth bass groove and the soulful vibe but unfortunately this doesn't fit my r&b playlist as they vocals were too sparse and lacked lyrics. This also doesn't quite have the punchier drums to fit my house playlist. I'm sorry to turn down your track for now.
Hey Chris Portka, while I liked the funky bass line and the smooth percussion, I'm sorry to say that the track overall just lacked a more distinct and memorable catchy element for me to connect with and nothing really stood out for me. I'm afraid I'll pass for now.
I believe the song's got a cool concept, it almost reminds me a bit of Glee and jazz combined together. However, I felt that the vocals could still be more locked into the notes a bit more as some of them could be a bit shaky. Sorry for passing on this track. However, I encourage you to keep pressing forward in your musical career.
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Hello Chris, thanks for your submission. This is a really enjoyable track with a great vibe. The groove is catchy, the bassline brings a lot of funk and movement, and the vocal elements work well as hooks that keep the track engaging throughout. Everything sounds polished and well put together. For me, the overall direction is a bit more upbeat and song-focused than what I usually feature. I’m mostly looking for more atmospheric, alternative electronica with a stronger focus on sound design, instrumental melodies, textures and organic elements, so it doesn’t quite fit the sound of the playlist. Wishing you all the best with the release and your future projects. Keep up the good work! Domas
Hi Chris Portka, thank you for sharing! I think the beat has a pretty engaging groove thanks to the added texture from the bass and the shaker, but I'm sorry to say that the low end is a little lacking and sounded a bit thin in the mix. Really sorry for the decline today. This is just my opinion and is meant to help. Keep it up and have a nice day! :)
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