Immortal Man
Posted by DJ Whit Allen, Sophia W Artist · Jun 25, 2026
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- Released on Spotify · Jul 3, 2026
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This Tribal House track was inspired by the Peaky Blinders movie of the same name on Netflix...in the lyrics I talk about how immortality isn’t about living forever...it’s leaving so much truth, fire, love, and consequence behind that death can’t erase me. Therefore…Immortality = what I leave in others (emotionally, spiritually, physically) that continues after me. I asked Sophia W, traditionally an a cappella singer, to perform the vocals on the track.
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Hey DJ Whit Allen, hearing a good arrangement on the track. However, this track's beat pattern is just different in contrast to the house patterns/productions on the playlist this is closest to in style. The lead in on the hihat is the main character of the beat which really asserts a different style in contrast to house. I'll have to decline for now because of this difference in production style
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- Journey To The Sun 2026: Sunset Inspired Organic House | Afro House | Latin | Melodic |Soulful | 2,234 followers
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Thank fort submitting 'Listen before you decide' a cool summer vibed track with nice warm vocals and melodic tones will support in the Journey to the sun list this one has nice sundowner vibes
Hi there and thank you for sharing your song! A nice and clean production! The soundtrack is very well done and sounds crisp. Great work on that! I am not a big fan of the vocals though. A bit too much. I prefer to enjoy the soundtrack a bit more so it does not lean towards pop too much. This is just my personal taste and opinion of course. All the best and have a great day. Good luck with upcoming projects! R
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Hi DJ Whit Allen, I think the vocals were quite catchy and the instrumental had an infectious energy. I'll be adding this to my Harmonic House playlist for sure, keep it up!
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Hey there! I think the vocal delivery works because it’s light, making it easier to process what is being said. The beat provides good support, though it could be a bit more powerful in the chorus, which currently feels a little loose. The melodies aren't particularly innovative either, so try to add some more variation there next time; that would make the arrangement even stronger. Unfortunately, I have to pass for now. Enjoy the rest of your week. Best wishes!
Hi, thank you so much for sending your track over! I really enjoyed your vocals, they’re really good, and the production quality is excellent. However, I feel the arrangement becomes a bit repetitive as the track progresses, which is why I’m going to pass on this one. I truly appreciate the effort you've put in and wish you all the best !
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Então, acabei de ouvir sua música e notamos que teve elementos percussivos que ajudam a guiar ritmos bem divertidos. No caso de afrobeat, é uma criatividade bem elaborada no meu ponto de vista como músico. Sobre a questão de afinação de sua voz, ela se encontra em dia, contando que teve sua dedicação ao longo do tempo. A melodia primária mostra que apresenta variáveis tipos como escala, arpejos e certas melódicas. As progressões de acordes e melódicos possuem bom nível de desenvolvimento. Apresentou boa estrutura musical e virada de bateria. Bem, eu tenho preferência a um estilo mais voltado para Alok, Cat Dealers, ou seja, Slap House. Sendo assim, asseguramos manter playlists com qualidade de curadoria e retenções de ouvintes. Recusarei esta música. Bom trabalho!
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Thanks for sharing this with me. I really enjoyed the energy and there are some fun production choices throughout, but the overall sound leans a little too much into club territory for the vibe I'm curating right now. I think softening some of the dance elements could help the song feel more versatile while still keeping its infectious energy. Sorry I won't be adding this one for now, but I truly appreciate the submission and wish you all the best with the release.
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Hey there! Your song is everything I'm looking for: I'll be really happy to have you in my playlist. Thank you for the submission!
Your song showcases an exceptional level of artistry, with outstanding production, a compelling vocal performance, and a composition that remains engaging from start to finish. The attention to detail and overall sonic balance reflect remarkable talent and professionalism. It's a truly well-crafted piece. However, the direction of my playlist is currently focused on tracks with a more intense, high-energy drive that creates a stronger rhythmic impact for my audience. For that reason, I've decided not to include it this time. I sincerely wish you continued success and all the best with your future releases.
Immortal Man seems like an appealing release to me with its well-presented and polished sound. It combines effects and a well-formed performance with charisma and potential. But I just don't feel connected to the melody and rhythm, especially because I tend to prioritize more harmony and balance. So much repetition in the lyrics takes away surprise and ways to transcend emotionally, the distinctive element I focus on for the playlist. It's entertaining but doesn't align with the depth I'm looking for.
Hello! I will be declining your track because I feel like your vocal could be mixed a little better. RIght now, it's a bit muddy I think just clean the low-mids a bit and you're good to go. I feel like the vocal just needs to sound more cohesive to your music. Great work nevertheless.
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